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sonhai is a modern living city with history and multiculture architecture, i miss an objekt wich owns the focus in the middle maybe an other glider closer with detail of the driver
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Allthough i know what this image wanted to be, it can't because of some issues that I think are appearand.
The center perspective starts out great, but then the left side buildings lean unnaturally to the right instead of staying upright. The right side tends to move also to the right a tad. If this was intended, then it's OK, but not really realistic.
The idea of mixing styles is great, but it don't quite work out (at least for me). I blame this on the lack of details. There are some details, yes, but not as much as it would like to see for my taste.
In overall the city looks to "clean". Yes, I've noticed it should be an modern city. But I think even modern cities are a bit dirty in those nooks and crannies.
Lastly I find a logical and size related "mistake":
Two tower watches on the same side close nearby?
The building in the lower right corner seems to be too small compared to the tree and tho the glider. Except this is a "Dwarfen's Inn" <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

In summary (IMHO):
Great idea, good approach, but unfortunately not so efficent execution concerning perspective and size issues, lack of details, to less "content" (people, vehicles, no dirt, no details).

And personally, I would like to have the ability to draw like this myself. Keep going!

Addum:
Somehow, the star rating won't let me choose a 3 star, only 2.5 oder 3.5. So see the "Originality" and "Technique" as 3 Stars, not 2.5.